Visionet logo

Any thoughts on this logo that I made? Is it good, could it be improved? I'm not really good at art design. :\

OK, first off: change the color of the word NET. On a white background it's unreadable. Maybe use a darker grey.

Secondly: you should make it so the lines on the word NET are the same thickness as the V. It looks awkward as it is.

How about this? Does this look fine now? To me, it looks nice and t h i c c. XD

I think this might be helpful.

I also have a golden rule that I use for most logos I make these days -- always make it so that it looks good in monochrome. Also, make variants that are for 1:1 spaces, and for 2:1 or 4:1 spaces. If that doesn't make sense, think of it as hood logos and quarterpanel logos.

The V with the Sauron-ish eye in it has some potential. Even more so if you use negative space properly.

Okay, thanks.

So I made a third version. I decided to drop the NET part all together and focus on the V. I subbed out the black and light black/dark grey for navy and purple and made the eye yellow and orange. How is it now?

I definitely like these colors more...

A human eye’s iris is circular as opposed to how your graphic has it in an oval shape...


Personally I think it would look better circular. Also, maybe play around with the placement of the eyeball... maybe the V is rising up out of the eye or the V is like a cone coming out of the eye.... There’s definitely room for more creativity here.

Nice progress so far.

Quick update on this post:

I want to say that while I appreciate the help and the ideas, I kinda burnt myself out on making the logo. I did like some of the versions and the idea but a few days after the third version, I pretty much procrastinated and lost that spark. I thank all of you for the idea and the constructive criticism you gave me but I'm just not cut out as a logo designer at this time. Hopefully in the future I can make a good one that would be memorable but for now, I need to take time and just practice.

Here's my take on the logo

Nice job. I like your take.

You're free to use it.