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Post by Mother of Invention Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:03 am

friend showed me an amazing piece of music M83 put out called "Midnight City" I enjoyed it so much I made a car from it.

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(Also I am aware the font is kinda odd and out of place, but I don't have any thing thinner, and the numbers are supposed small on purpose.)


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Post by Vincent Giacalone Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:25 am

Even then, the number could use something to liven it up...a few strokes and/or skewing maybe.
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Post by Alta Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:15 am

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Post by PackerMan71 Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:19 am

Nascarboy426 wrote:Even then, the number could use something to liven it up...a few strokes and/or skewing maybe.


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Post by Magus978 Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:19 am

I'm not gonna lie. This and the Bearforce paint are terrible. No amount of constructive criticism can save it.

Best to just scrap this. Seriously, try harder next time. This really looks like you took 5 minutes in the in-game paint shop.
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Post by MPatterson1724 Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:25 am

10/10 keep them coming
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Post by Cynon Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:31 am

What's going on with the paintjob?

Let's start with a few things that desperately need fixing;

The numbers on the doors are too small and it makes no sense for it to be that small especially when the roof numbers are normal size...

The color of the hood ... album cover?? doesn't match up with the base.

The base colors sort of line up okay but that's really the only thing this car has going for it right now. I'd understand if you were either new to painting or were drunk but I honestly don't know what you were trying to do.

My signature has a good message for you in big, bold text.


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Post by SnakePlissken Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:20 am

The band's name is actually just "M83."

As for the song, I'll use this quote from the comments:

The music sounds like an elephant on helium.

As for the car:

Magus978 wrote:I'm not gonna lie. This and the Bearforce paint are terrible. No amount of constructive criticism can save it.

Best to just scrap this. Seriously, try harder next time. This really looks like you took 5 minutes in the in-game paint shop.

Although this is pretty harsh, I have to agree with the assessment. You were progressing along and slowly but surely showing some signs of improvement but with the last 2 attempts you've regressed back to your old ways.

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Post by OpenwheelRiggleman Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:26 am

Yeah, I've seen some of your other cars. C'mon, we know you can do better!
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Post by pepsibottle1 Sun Jan 22, 2012 1:57 pm

Please don't take it the wrong way, but really? How much did you put into making this, because it looks like a cut/paste piece of trash This is rivaling the stuff I've seen on Openspeedway. If this was a job and your employer saw this, he would fire you in a heartbeat. Next time, try to take pride in your work and make a product you can be proud of instead of chucking out 5 minute rush jobs like that. You can do better
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