Review My Offline League Commentary

I've been doing commentary on NR2003 for about over a year now and I'm starting Season 10 in my series and I'm doing somewhat of a different style. If ya'll have the time feel free to critique it. The video is 19 minutes long. Few notes that you don't need to tell me are:

1. The Bandicam logo, it will go away someday.
2. I used some EFR templates for manufacturers like Volkswagen and one for Mitsubishi.
3. There are a few errors I made which ya'll will most likely notice, if you notice one that I didn't see then feel free to point it out.