Need Comments on this one

Hey guy, you have any suggestions on how to make this car even better.

It's a really good design and start, but the lack of contigs makes it look a little empty, it looks so plain without them. I'd also suggest adding a little more white on the front quarter panel, but that's really more of a personal preference.

Looking good, though, I really like the color scheme you chose and the font used for the numbers. Keep it up.

nope, it sucks, give up painting forevers

Dan Mackay wrote:nope, it sucks, give up painting forevers

He can paint better than me, but I'll be happy to lend a few ideas:

1. Change the primary sponsor from Westerman to Hamke (The one on the rear)
2. Change the teal to the same blue with the Hamke logo, use the Hamke logo and add it to the hood, take the Westerman logo and make it around the same height as the quarterpanel logos (Westerman text) and place said logo by the quarterpanel logos towards the rear of the vehicle. The red stripe, make it a darker red and make it bigger (2 pixels may be the trick)
3. Add TM Contigs
4. Remove the mask
5. Hand it off the Cynon if your entry is accepted, you can find all the ratings and contigs in the Background and Information forum in the TM Section. Do not forget to add ratings!

Once rendered, it doesn't look all that bad, it's just the angle of vision and preferences I guess.

Why does the paintjob look like it has flat colors?

The quarter logos could use a red stroke, the Cooper logos need to be red, the rear spoiler needs to be colored (possibly different colors on both sides), could use some head and taillight numbers, and some contigs couldn't hurt. You might also try adding some noise/metal flake to the teal part of the base.

The signature looks a bit odd, but other then that, it's not bad.

It's not a bad start but like most have said you should put a red stroke around the quarter panel logos and preferably make the Cooper Tire logos red as well. The red lines on the hood and at the back of the quarter panels appear to be a little misaligned too but not bad so those don't need a whole lot of touching up.

Other than that all I would do is add an overlay so the colors don't look so dull and maybe add some contigs to fill in the car a little more.

Added red stroke around the Westerman text.
Lengthened the Westerman text.
Added Rookie Stripe
Added Flake to the green area
Added overlay (Forgot to turn it on)
Added an additional associate Sponsor

Credits:

Logos: Racing Grafix.com/simracingdesign.com
Numbers: Dafont.com
Template: Cynon


Also for those asking about contigs, I cant find the link to the 2011 contigs.

Looks better, but it still needs contigs. This is my opinion, but the MOOG logo needs to be alittle smaller, so it doesn't go into the red stripe.

Dan Mackay wrote:nope, it sucks, give up painting forevers

Constructive Criticism. Try it.

Rykia_RKXK wrote:Looks better, but it still needs contigs. This is my opinion, but the MOOG logo needs to be alittle smaller, so it doesn't go into the red stripe.

Disregard what I said about the MOOG logo. It looks fine when rendered. Looks alot better though.