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Post by bsoyuz on Sat Nov 30, 2013 5:33 pm

Presenting to you the Kanako Motor Company Inc.



My first car (yeah, I know, it's horrible)

The 2003 Kanako Monogatari

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Post by JammyDodger155 on Sat Nov 30, 2013 6:06 pm

That is not at all terrible or a first attempt it looks good Smile 
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Post by bsoyuz on Sun Dec 01, 2013 8:59 am

The 2000 - 2005 Kanako Monogatari ( I redid it)

It's a lot improved:



Headlights from the TVR Sagaris, grill from the Chevy Monte Carlo, Tailights from the Toyota FT86

Should I send a download link???
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Post by JammyDodger155 on Sun Dec 01, 2013 3:16 pm

The 2nd car is better but the lights need moving up some more since they are below the bumper line. other than that great start
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Post by gwoodard41 on Sun Dec 01, 2013 5:38 pm

Maybe level out the headlights with the grill a little (30 0 -30) lower the nose grill some, place the company logo above the grill (and smaller). Bring back the original grill you had where you have the monte carlo grill now.
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Post by bsoyuz on Sun Dec 01, 2013 6:40 pm

I redone the front from the scratch:
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Post by Magus978 on Sun Dec 01, 2013 7:03 pm

The rear lights don't look completely right...unless you're going for the oddest looking rear lights ever.

Other than that, not too shabby.
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Post by bsoyuz on Sun Dec 01, 2013 7:05 pm

Magus978 wrote:The rear lights don't look completely right...unless you're going for the oddest looking rear lights ever.

Other than that, not too shabby.
I was really searching for an "unique" tailight. This is the Toyota FT86 lights
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Post by Mother of Invention on Sun Dec 01, 2013 7:18 pm

I like the second car best, just put it on a ford or Dodge body.

Try entering it into PCC Cup while your at it.
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Post by bsoyuz on Mon Dec 02, 2013 9:51 am



Adjusted for a Dodge body:



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Post by Cynon on Mon Dec 02, 2013 9:57 am

bsoyuz wrote:
Magus978 wrote:The rear lights don't look completely right...unless you're going for the oddest looking rear lights ever.

Other than that, not too shabby.
I was really searching for an "unique" tailight. This is the Toyota FT86 lights
If you're looking for a truly unigue taillight, make them yourself. Then you can do whatever you like. Razz

The lights you have look ... a little silly, especially with those circular, bulbous headlights (1998 Ford? 1957 Chevy?). Gives a rather mixed image, to say the least.

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Post by bsoyuz on Mon Dec 02, 2013 10:41 am

Cynon wrote:The lights you have look ... a little silly, especially with those circular, bulbous headlights (1998 Ford? 1957 Chevy?). Gives a rather mixed image, to say the least.
The headlights are from the Jaguar XJR.

It's better now?...

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Post by bsoyuz on Mon Dec 02, 2013 1:11 pm

The new Kanako Motors car is unveiled:

2013 Kanako Sora:



I saw this front bumper thingy, I'll work on it.
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