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Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by Sparkz47 on Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:15 am

The new and improved version is here folks, with new and improved logos!



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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by Rykia on Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:30 am

That's a really good paint Sparkz!
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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by gwoodard41 on Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:39 am

The main logos on the rear quarterpanels really need to be smoothed out. Either complete the white around the front of the car or get the swooshes off Smile
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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by Sparkz47 on Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:55 am

gwoodard41 wrote:The main logos on the rear quarterpanels really need to be smoothed out. Either complete the white around the front of the car or get the swooshes off

Which swooshes? The ones around the hood logo?
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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by BWard on Sat Nov 24, 2012 3:28 am

This car rocks Wink
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Post by gwoodard41 on Sat Nov 24, 2012 4:07 am

I meant the ones on the front quarter panels, you already removed them.
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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by Cynon on Sat Nov 24, 2012 4:43 am

The Dash Cup logos are supposed to be green I believe.

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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by RyanB06 on Sat Nov 24, 2012 7:22 am

gwoodard41 wrote:The main logos on the rear quarterpanels really need to be smoothed out. Either complete the white around the front of the car or get the swooshes off Smile

Higher-quality logos will fix that. It looks like they're sized up from whatever they were. The first couple items here will help.

One thing I do see is that the silver stripe and black outline don't line up at the front fender: they're a pixel or two off. (At least that's how it looks on the driver's side, not sure about the passenger. Easy fix: use the selection tool and move the outer edge (the one toward the front of the car) out and fill in the space with the silver color.
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Post by Sparkz47 on Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:17 pm

Cynon wrote:The Dash Cup logos are supposed to be green I believe.

Will do, I just wasn't sure whether or not we were allowed to change the color so I went for it.

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gwoodard41 wrote:The main logos on the rear quarterpanels really need to be smoothed out. Either complete the white around the front of the car or get the swooshes off

Higher-quality logos will fix that. It looks like they're sized up from whatever they were. The first couple items here will help.

One thing I do see is that the silver stripe and black outline don't line up at the front fender: they're a pixel or two off. (At least that's how it looks on the driver's side, not sure about the passenger. Easy fix: use the selection tool and move the outer edge (the one toward the front of the car) out and fill in the space with the silver color.

Thanks a ton. Pretty much every logo on this car came from an Allianz vector I got from BrandsOfTheWorld (which was rather small). These logos will definitely help.

Also, about the stripe, where exactly do you see the issue? Not saying it isn't there, I just don't see it. Unless you're talking about the black line not reaching all the way to the fender, which I just noticed.
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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by RyanB06 on Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:21 pm

The part where the black outline meets up with the blue on the nose.
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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by Sparkz47 on Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:27 pm

RyanB06 wrote:The part where the black outline meets up with the blue on the nose.

Ah, I've got it now. Yeah, it does look kind of wonky. Thanks, man, I didn't see that.
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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by Sparkz47 on Sat Dec 01, 2012 12:13 am

Cleaned up the existing logos and added some new ones on the back. I also tried something different with the rear QP logos that I thought looked really cool on the flat, but they came out a little...jagged in the render. Any thoughts on how to fix that?
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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by Cynon on Sat Dec 01, 2012 12:30 am

Only thing I would do differently is put a bunch of small associate sponsors (note: all of them should be white text only) in the blue parts on the bottom of the doors. Other then that, perfect. Very Happy

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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by SnakePlissken on Sat Dec 01, 2012 2:38 am

The base stripe on the hood suddenly stops. Can it be extended to surround the "STS" on the hood/nose region?

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Re: Sparkz' Latest Unspeakable Horror

Post by Sparkz47 on Sat Dec 01, 2012 3:38 am

SnakePlissken wrote:The base stripe on the hood suddenly stops. Can it be extended to surround the "STS" on the hood/nose region?

I noticed that as well. I did my best to sort of round it out, but it still looks rather abrupt. I would extend it down, but it seems like it would be a nightmare to line up since I don't have carviewer.
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