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Post by Metro 6r4 on Thu Aug 09, 2012 4:39 pm

Barclay Velocity

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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by PRAWBLEMS on Thu Aug 09, 2012 4:41 pm

The font on Velocity looks... smushed.
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by gwoodard41 on Thu Aug 09, 2012 5:03 pm

The render scene makes the car seem... too cartoonish looking?
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by Metro 6r4 on Thu Aug 09, 2012 6:54 pm

What can I do to solve this?
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Post by SnakePlissken on Thu Aug 09, 2012 9:00 pm

Metro 6r4 wrote:What can I do to solve this?

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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by Alpineopossum on Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:38 pm

Maybe do one called the Barclay Premier? It will be a Escalade style SUV driven by Wayne Rooney Razz

Premier League jokes aside, it's a good design. Front looks nice and rather crisp, and the taillights are your typical verticals with a twist. Not bad. I don't like the logo. The font is great, but I don't see the car belonging on the logo.
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by Metro 6r4 on Sun Aug 12, 2012 3:01 pm

is this logo any better?
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by Metro 6r4 on Mon Aug 13, 2012 10:50 am

Now thats better. thanx for the link Snake Very Happy
Rear lights could do with work I think, and I'm still not sure about that logo. would love to know if I could get this in a series, but it is a nr2002 painting
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by ParaLanche on Mon Aug 13, 2012 1:06 pm

Dash cup possibly?
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by Metro 6r4 on Mon Aug 13, 2012 1:15 pm

ParaLanche wrote:Dash cup possibly?
It would be nice, but I know that you can't just get what you want straight away. I'l have to ask or something.
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by gwoodard41 on Mon Aug 13, 2012 1:37 pm

Put the nose logo above the nose grill, see what happens.
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Post by Metro 6r4 on Mon Aug 13, 2012 3:08 pm

gwoodard41 wrote:Put the nose logo above the nose grill, see what happens.

I couldn't get it just above the grill but under the bonnet because it wouldn't align no matter what.
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by Metro 6r4 on Tue Aug 14, 2012 5:54 pm

Its a bit irrelevant but here's an old car for a fictional series I had called the American Super Saloon Champinship (ASSC)
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Post by Metro 6r4 on Wed Aug 15, 2012 8:40 am

ParaLanche wrote:Dash cup possibly?
Dash Cup Scheme
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by Milan655 on Wed Aug 15, 2012 8:45 am

The Barclay logo on the hood looks a little silly in the French tricolor, and you might want a thick black stroke around the Cipriani logos, they look slightly thin. However, considering you are new to GIMP, the template really looks quite impressive, likewise the paintscheme Wink
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Post by Metro 6r4 on Wed Aug 15, 2012 9:33 am

Milan655 wrote:The Barclay logo on the hood looks a little silly in the French tricolor, and you might want a thick black stroke around the Cipriani logos, they look slightly thin. However, considering you are new to GIMP, the template really looks quite impressive, likewise the paintscheme Wink
I'm gonna have to do a lot of experimenting with the hood logo because i can't get one good enough and I would make the cipriani logo have a a thick line around it but I don't know how.
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Post by Milan655 on Wed Aug 15, 2012 9:49 am

If you select the logo, in the toolbar select "select". Scroll down the drop down to find "Grow", and give it 3/4px. Create a new layer behind the Cipriani layer, and take the paint bucket with black, and paint into the selection Wink
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Post by Metro 6r4 on Wed Aug 15, 2012 10:53 am

Milan655 wrote:The Barclay logo on the hood looks a little silly in the French tricolor, and you might want a thick black stroke around the Cipriani logos, they look slightly thin. However, considering you are new to GIMP, the template really looks quite impressive, likewise the paintscheme Wink

another new barclay logo
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Post by Milan655 on Thu Aug 16, 2012 12:30 am

I think that looks really good now Wink
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Post by Metro 6r4 on Thu Aug 16, 2012 9:06 am

Milan655 wrote:I think that looks really good now Wink
thanks. Smile I learn something new every day I use gimp. I'm gonna try and get this in for this new cromwell cup thats starting, Lisa Collson will drive this one and I may get someone else to do the others.
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Post by gwoodard41 on Thu Aug 16, 2012 11:37 am

Metro 6r4 wrote:
Milan655 wrote:I think that looks really good now Wink
thanks. Smile I learn something new every day I use gimp. I'm gonna try and get this in for this new cromwell cup thats starting, Lisa Collson will drive this one and I may get someone else to do the others.

Only chassis used in the 2007-2011 seasons of the TMMC or ARLA can be used in the Cromwell Series, sorry CONFOOSED
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by Metro 6r4 on Thu Aug 16, 2012 12:57 pm

gwoodard41 wrote:
Metro 6r4 wrote:
Milan655 wrote:I think that looks really good now Wink
thanks. Smile I learn something new every day I use gimp. I'm gonna try and get this in for this new cromwell cup thats starting, Lisa Collson will drive this one and I may get someone else to do the others.

Only chassis used in the 2007-2011 seasons of the TMMC or ARLA can be used in the Cromwell Series, sorry CONFOOSED
Yea I've put this scheme on the 2011 Lenard R37 Body and I'm hoping someone can do the other two for me(it's in the request section), I was going to ask if this could be used but I don't think it's ready or would even be accepted.
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Re: Barclay Velocity

Post by Cynon on Thu Aug 16, 2012 1:50 pm

This seriously looks like it could just be another Lenard model. Um...

Barclay is also the name of a former TMMC team.

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Post by gwoodard41 on Thu Aug 16, 2012 1:54 pm

Cynon wrote:This seriously looks like it could just be another Lenard model. Um...

Or an 'Updated' Velocity Model that Ernhrtfan did way back.



Or maybe not, I really don't know.
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Post by Metro 6r4 on Thu Aug 16, 2012 2:19 pm

I've used a model and manufacture name that's already in use again. Someone give me a name and I'l change it as soon as my internet quits being so laggy
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Post by SnakePlissken on Thu Aug 16, 2012 4:34 pm

Valkyrie. You could do a cool Norse looking logo and font for it.

Or make the company name be Valkyrie and the car model be the "Flight."

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Post by Metro 6r4 on Mon Aug 20, 2012 6:11 pm

SnakePlissken wrote:Valkyrie. You could do a cool Norse looking logo and font for it.

Or make the company name be Valkyrie and the car model be the "Flight."
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Post by gwoodard41 on Mon Aug 20, 2012 7:27 pm

That logo reminds me of the spy from spy vs spy shorts (MAD)
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Post by SnakePlissken on Sat Aug 25, 2012 9:17 am

I like the text, but a keep in mind that a Valkyrie is fierce female charcter. I chose the model name "Flight" from this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3YOYlgvI1uE

in case you were wondering.

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Post by Metro 6r4 on Sun Aug 26, 2012 8:48 am

I noticed that a lot of people use Ten0rs, I have just had a sneak peek at something Ceej has made (spoiler). anyway i did this. I'm thinking of starting again on a base that a series actually uses
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